First off, I wish to thank the
podcast commentators (“PCs”) for taking the time to consider and to review our
paper. There are obviously countless papers they could have chosen to discuss,
and it is certainly a privilege for our paper to have received some exposure. The podcast is here, starting at 45:45:
The following addresses the major concerns raised by
the PCs in their podcast. I refer to their comments in their entirety, so I do
not identify which specific commentator has made any given comment.
1.
Why
do we not talk about birds?
This is a fair question. The authors discussed this
during the drafting process. In an earlier draft, we did mention other animal
species that exploit energy saving mechanisms of some kind, and other species
that travel in single files. However, other
than cyclists, rather than mentioning various other species, like birds, fish,
dolphins, and others which exploit drag reduction and exhibit single-files or
staggered single files and related formations, we decided to identify primarily
arthropods that have been shown to exhibit single-file behavior in terms of
“collective locomotion” (p. 2 of our paper), regardless of whether that
behavior has been shown to originate from drag reduction. Primarily, we refer to spiny lobsters, which
have in fact been shown to reduce drag by single file formations. At pages 2 to 3 of our paper, we do mention
other species that involve hydrodynamic
drafting; but, aside from cyclists, we do not mention other species that
exploit aerodynamic energy saving
mechanisms because of the obvious criticism that water and air are different,
not to mention that birds and trilobites are vastly different animals.
That of course leads to the question (which is a fair
one): if you are excluding other animal species that exploit aerodynamic energy
saving mechanisms, then why are you comparing trilobites to human cyclists, who
are racing and who use strategies and team tactics in an aerodynamic medium?
We specifically addressed this question by stating, at
page 2:
“Although
driven in part by human-based competitive strategy, pelotons exhibit self-organized collective behaviours that
emerge largely as a function of the metabolic outputs of the individuals within
the group, and the power output
reductions afforded by drafting (Trenchard et al. 2014). As cyclists
approach their maximal sustainable capacities, formations stretch into
single-file lines (queues); below a certain output threshold, single-file lines
tend to collapse into compact unidirectional formations, as shown in Figure 1A,
B (Trenchard et al. 2014, 2015; Trenchard 2015).” (emphasis added)
Here the referenced peloton papers specifically model collective behaviors
that emerge from differential metabolic
outputs between leaders and followers,
coupled by drafting. As far as I am aware, no other research has done this,
and this includes research on bird vee-formations and fish schooling formations.
In the cited references, my
collaborators and I have conducted computer simulations of the threshold power
outputs that generate certain collective behaviors, including single file lines
and “compact” formations, examples of which are shown in Figure 1.
There are of course many papers
that discuss the fluid dynamics involved in drag reductions. There are also other models of flocking
behavior, a general term that also includes fish schooling and similar
collective animal behavior. However, there are no other studies I am aware of
that involve the noted metabolic differentials, mediated by drafting, that
allow predictions of formation phase changes as a function of changing
collective metabolic outputs. Our peloton model focusses on self-organized collective behavior, as
we have explicitly stated – this means that we have stripped away human-based
racing strategy from the fundamental modelled behaviors, leaving basic physical
and physiological principles that drive the emergence of collective behavior. These
basic behaviors can then be analyzed for other animal species where those
principles appear to be involved.
Thus, we did not want simply to compare
the single file formation between species, which we could well have done by
presenting images of birds flying in vee-formations or in single file. Rather, the aim was to rely on published
models of collective behaviors that emerge at critical metabolic thresholds. Now
perhaps we could have elaborated on the meaning of “self-organized collective
behavior” to more explicitly address the concerns raised by the PCs, and to
have curtailed potential misunderstanding. This is a fair criticism. However, it should be plain to attentive
readers that we are applying a model of general collective behavior which may
more broadly be referred to as “peloton behavior”, and that such a model is not
otherwise used in the literature.
On a related note, one of PCs
refers to Figure 1 and the comparison between pelotons and trilobites as a
“construction”. Again, a careful consideration of the mathematical model, as
applied by reference to peloton papers, would lead an attentive reader to see
plainly that the comparison is not at all a mere construction or some
superficial analogy. Unfortunately, the
PCs appear to give short shrift to the model presented, but instead appear
largely to prefer to take umbrage with minor aspects of the paper.
Similarly, the PCs do not discuss
the potential wider significance of the model, but instead, as I have noted, seem
to drown-out the wider potential significance by focussing on what are largely
minor considerations and their implication that the peloton analogy is merely
superficial. They do not ask the
question: what is the variation range hypothesis – what is that all about? This
hypothesis is fundamental to the paper and, in giving it minimal attention, the
PCs appear to have missed one of the critical and potentially important
elements of the paper.
2.
The relationship
between energy saving and size variation
That said, in fairness to the PCs,
they briefly acknowledge the application of the mathematical model to trilobite
formations, albeit in a rather dismissive fashion. They do touch on what we
argue about the energy saving quantity and our attempt to relate that quantity
to the size variation among trilobites. First, however, the PCs erroneously suggest
we refer to papers from the “60’s or 70’s” to support the idea that larger
animals tend to be stronger. Here we say, at p. 3:
“We
consider the behavioural consequences of these differentials, and their effects
on the relative sizes of individual trilobites. In this context, certain
scaling rules are applicable: except for birds and very large animals, speeds
tend to scale with body mass (Garland 1983); speed is also proportionate to
body length, a rule that applies across the range of running and swimming
organisms from bacteria to arthropods to whales (Meyer-Vernet 2015) and as
indicated by Jamieson et al. (2012); this is discussed in detail below.
Moreover, juveniles tend to be slower, weaker and less agile than adults of the
same species (Carrier 1996). It is thus reasonable to assume that larger
trilobites were capable of higher speeds than smaller trilobites. Also, because
drafting generates reductions in metabolic and power requirements, it is
reasonable to conclude that smaller trilobites could sustain speeds by drafting
that were otherwise unsustainable when travelling in isolation. In this paper
we model these effects.”
Where in this context is the
reference to papers from the 60s and 70s?
It is true that in the context of basic hydrodynamics, we do refer to
the seminal work of Hoerner from 1965, a well-cited leading reference, but the
PCs are obviously wrong that we refer to papers from the 60s and 70s regarding
the scaling of animal size to their speeds. That’s a minor concern, but there
is an unfounded implication that we may be relying on old material that may no
longer be relevant.
Next, and more substantively, the
PCs suggest we do not connect the energy saving quantity to any data. While it
is fair to say that we did not conduct an exhaustive literature review of
reported size ranges among trilobite clusters (which we acknowledged), we do
refer our model back to the Blazejowksi queues, and other papers. At page 10, we say:
“Speyer
& Brett (1985) reported size-segregated clusters of Middle Devonian Phacops rana, Greenops boothi, and Dechenella
rowi from the Windom Smoke Creek Bed (Windom Shale, Hamilton Group) and
from the Murder Creek Bed (Wanakah Shale) both from western New York State. The
authors reported cephalon length ranges of 0.6–1.4
cm (57% range, where cephalon length correlates with body length; Trammer & Kaim 1997) and cephalon
length ranges of 0.4–1.0 cm (60% range), respectively. Further, the authors
reported spatially separated clusters of different mean size, indicating that
specific instar classes associated among themselves to the exclusion of other
classes.
In
a similar finding, Karim & Westrop (2002) reported a non-linear cluster of
Late Ordovician Homotelus bromidensis
from the Bromide Formation, Dunn Quarry (Oklahoma) with cephalic lengths
between 1.0 and 2.25 cm (56% range),
and a second non-linear cluster with cephalic lengths between 1.0 and 2.75 cm (64% range). These cases indicate that group members
travelled together due to their approximate size equality, and suggest that
groups of different mean speeds would arrive at stopover points at different
times. This proposition does not challenge a gregarious behavioural explanation
for instar segregation, but rather complements such an explanation while
providing insight into the more primitive origins of gregarious segregation.
Kin & Błazejowski (2013) reported that among 78 examples of Late Devonian (Famennian) Trimerocephalus queues from the Kowala Quarry (Poland), specimens ranged in size from 0.5 to 2.0 cm body
length (75% range). Although this range exceeds the range of c. 62% predicted
by the variation range hypothesis, the overall 0.5–2.0 cm body length (75%
range) appears to represent the size range among all specimens in the study but
does not distinguish between size segregated groups and narrower size-ranges
among the queues themselves. Following the Kin & Błazejowski (2013) study,
Błazejowski et al. (2016) reported that for the same 78 queues, the size ranges
for individual queues were between 0.7 and 1.9 cm (63% range), thus supporting
the assertion that the 75% range reported by Kin & Błazejowski (2013) was
for the entire sample population and not queue-specific. It is also noteworthy
that in their study of queues from the Kowala Quarry, Radwanski et al. (2009)
reported that ‘The majority of queues are formed from the largest
individuals. The smaller-sized
individuals are arranged as a rule in short files consisting of only two
individuals’ (p. 467). From this it appears that the queues had indeed sorted
themselves in much the way predicted by the variation range hypothesis. Kin
& Radwanski (2008) also reported specimens from the Kowala Quarry in files,
of mature growth stage, between 1.8 and
2.4 cm (25% range) …
In
another study, Gutierrez-Marco et al. (2009) reported monospecific clusters of
large Middle Ordovician trilobites Ogyginus
forteyi and Asaphellus in Arouca
Geopark (Portugal), 7–17 in number, of ‘similar
sized specimens’ (p. 444), but the authors did not report precise ranges.”
(emphasis added).
Now, in looking at our conclusions,
we might have done well to say rather more directly “there is some evidence in
the literature to support the variation range hypothesis” which a reader might well
be expecting to see in the conclusion. However,
one need only look back at the Abstract and page 10 as quoted above, and the
expected size range we have proposed (~62%) (or narrower, which is consistent with the hypothesis), to see that we have presented some
evidence for the hypothesis. I do acknowledge that we have not provided an exhaustive
literature review, but we have presented some evidence for the proposition and
a falsifiable hypothesis. Further, in our conclusions, we clearly have
recognized the need for further data.
3.
The
criticism regarding our reference to ant single files.
The PCs argue, rather cynically, that we should be
aware that ants use pheromones to establish single file lines, and that we have
erroneously claimed that ants form single files as a means of drag reduction.
However, the PCs are simply wrong to suggest we claim that ant single files are
a means of drag reduction. First, drag reduction is just one mechanism of
collective energy saving, and nowhere do we assert that drag reduction is the
only such means, nor do we suggest that single files among species involve
exclusively drag reduction. In the case of ants, we made no representation
whatsoever that they exploit drag reduction as a means of energy saving nor do
we assert that drag reduction is the source of ants in single file. All we said was that “single-file travelling
formations have been observed among other arthropods, including ants…” Further
on, we say, “Among these, ant single file formations have been modelled and
studied in terms of energy optimization (Chaudhuri & Nagar, 2015), but we
found no reports quantifying the energy savings obtained by such
formations.”
Let’s look briefly at the Chaudhuri & Nagar (2015)
paper, which the PCs ought to have done if they were going to allege that we
had wrongly referred to the mechanism underlying ant single file formations. Indeed,
the very first line of the abstract states:
“We present a model of
ant traffic considering individual ants as self-propelled particles undergoing
single file motion on a one-dimensional trail."
At p. 4 of the Chaudhuri & Nagar paper, in
discussing their methods, the authors describe an aspect of ant single file
line optimization that occurs by adjustments in velocity reduction when
touching or colliding with each other:
“The reduction of
velocity fluctuation with density led to our choice for the diffusion constant
getting exponentially suppressed with increase in local density. This ensures
that the ant fluid reduces the local effective temperature when density
increases, to keep a control over the local pressure. This means that while
ants do not completely avoid collisions among themselves, they do make sure
that the number of collisions per unit time are kept largely unchanged.”
The point is that arguably there is some form of energy optimization that
occurs with single files, NOT that single files necessarily involve drag
reduction. We absolutely did not make
such a representation, and the commentators are simply wrong to assert that we
somehow implied that ant single file formations involve drag reduction.
Further, I specifically researched ant single-file formation that did not necessarily involve pheromones. The PCs should ask themselves why
we chose the E.O. Wilson (1959) and the Hansen and Klotz (2005) references when
there are myriad others that talk about ant pheromone signalling and that show ant
single files in easily accessible images and photos. In fact, the references
were carefully selected to address the very criticism that the PCs have raised.
The E.O. Wilson reference (1959) speaks of ant tandem-running
which involves tactile coordination. Wilson, states, at p. 34:
“The
behavior of compressus resembles that of paria except that as
many as ten or twenty workers follow in a single file behind the leader…
Nevertheless, it will have to be remembered that in Cardiocondyla, at
least, tandem running is a highly evolved behavioral pattern in its own right.
It can be fairly said to include more complex individual behavior than
trail-laying and trail-following.”
As an aside, also see “Teaching in tandem-running
ants”, by Franks and Richardson (2006. Nature, Vol. 439 January). It is
interesting that Franks and Richardson say, “an individual is a teacher if it
modifies its behavior at some cost to itself, in order to set an example so
that the other individual can learn more quickly.” This is yet another energy
saving mechanism among ants, and more generally, that does not involve drag
reduction, because pupils save time and energy by not having to learn by trial
and error. Pheromones are not specifically or necessarily involved in this energy
saving principle.
The Klotz and Hansen (2005), p. 135, reference simply
cites another example of ant tandem-running, which the Wilson reference has
already said involves single files:
“The methods used to
recruit carpenter ants to food sources range from primitive tandem running, to
group recruitment, to more advanced behaviors (Holldobler and Wilson 1990). In
tandem running, a scout leads while a follower maintains antennal contact with
her.”
I suppose we could have identified ant single files in
our paper as specifically of the “tandem-running” variety, and discussed why the
behavior is not necessarily dominated by pheromone signals, but it was
unnecessary to do so in the generalized context.
4.
The
criticism regarding the position of enrolled juveniles on a different bedding
plane.
The PCs take issue with our having mentioned the
position of juveniles on a different bedding plane, as discussed by
Blazejowsksi et al. (2016). They go so far as to quote from our paper, but
before they read out loud the quote that would have answered their own
question, they stopped short. Had they continued they would have read out the
following:
“However,
because they appear on a different bedding plane, the small enrolled juveniles
may have arrived at their positions at a different time, or may have already
been at their positions in ‘nursery grounds’ before the queues arrived as
Błazejowski et al. (2016) tentatively explained, and probably did not migrate
with the queues containing their much larger counterparts.”
We had originally drafted this
point slightly differently and, in its original form, was raised by one of the
reviewers as requiring revision. The
above is how we addressed the concern. As far as I can tell from the PCs
concern, the quoted paragraph quite squarely addresses the issue they have
raised.
5.
The
Draganits (1998) reference.
One of the PCs suggests the figure we referenced from
the Draganits (1998) paper does not show what we claim. Figure 6 from the Draganits paper is
described: “Sharply defined beaten track c. 30 cm wide and more than 1.5 m
visible on the bedding surface consisting of more than a dozen individual
trackways of probable eurypterids. Single trackways and their walking
directions are hard to determine.”
If that was, by itself, the reference we were seeking
to use as support for single file behavior among eurypterids, then I would
absolutely agree with the PCs criticism. In fact, had I seen this paper by
itself, I would not have thought to refer to it. However, that is why we have included the
reference to the Braddy (2001) paper, which is where we find support for our
reference and the implication of possible single file behavior. At p. 127 of Braddy:
“It is interpreted that
they were produced at approximately the same time due to the concentrations of
trackways on the same bedding planes. A further interesting observation is a
‘beaten track’ with more than a dozen parallel eurypterid trackways (Draganits
et al., 1998, Fig. 6), possibly
indicating that the eurypterids were following one another.” (emphasis added).
Now, I can see that Braddy’s reference to parallel
trackways could be interpreted to mean following side-by-side rather than in
single files, but it seems to me when someone argues for “following” behavior,
they are usually speaking of one-behind the other, and the relative narrowness
(30 cm) of the ‘beaten’ trackways seems to imply one-behind-the-other following,
more so than side-by-side. And, common knowledge suggests that we do not see comparatively
long lines of directly horizontally linear side-by-side following to occur much
in nature (which does not mean to say it is never seen, but the intuitive interpretation
is for one-behind the other following behavior). In our paper, in the highly general
introductory first paragraph, we simply say, “Fossilized ‘beaten’ trackways of
probable eurypterids indicate similar queuing behavior (Draganits et al., 1998,
fig 6; Braddy, 2001)”. If the PCs want to criticize the implication of possible
single files, then they should address the Braddy discussion. Regardless, our paper is not about
eurypterids, and for our purposes it frankly makes no difference whether
eurypterids travelled in single files or not – it was simply an example, for
the sake of context and interest, of where in the fossil record similar kinds
of behavior may be indicated, whether or not the actual events of millions of
years ago were as they have been interpreted or suggested in the literature.
The PCs, however, take umbrage with the reference and
charge us with misrepresentation, which is a serious accusation of academic
misconduct. Such an accusation is misguided
and out of proportion to the context given that the reference is such a minor
component of the paper with no significance to our findings -- not to mention
that the PCs allegation is easily refuted in any event on closer look at the
Braddy reference. I suggest, and
respectfully request that the PCs retract their allegation of
misrepresentation.
6.
The
presentation of Figure 1
The PCs have asked why Figure 1 is not much larger and
suggest the trilobite images are cropped or low resolution JPEGs. First, the images from the Radwanksi et al.
(2009) paper are not cropped, and whether the images are the highest resolution
quality or not is such an insignificant issue that I won’t bother addressing it
further. Secondly, perhaps Figure 1 could have been larger, as the PCs suggest;
but again, that is such a minor consideration that I won’t bother with it
further. It should also be noted that neither
of the peloton images are from the Tour de France, as the PCs suggest, but that
is minor.
7.
Summary
I have addressed the question
raised as to why we did not refer to birds in our paper. I have further
explained why pelotons are indeed an appropriate starting point to model
certain collective behaviors of trilobites.
The PCs have made three more major criticisms
they say undermine the entire paper. One of these is an allegation of academic
misconduct. First, I have addressed the PCs misguided criticism regarding our
reference to ants. The second major
criticism is in suggesting that we had misrepresented the Draganits (1998)
paper. The PCs’ have made this allegation without recognizing that the Braddy
(2001) paper was the true source of our reference on that point. I respectfully request the PCs to retract
publicly their allegation in this regard.
A third criticism suggests that we
have not connected our hypothesis to data, which I have addressed in the
foregoing.
Generally, in saying there were
“two strikes against” our paper, which were not well-founded criticisms in any
event, the PCs seem to have, rather unfortunately, thrown out the baby with the
bathwater and have failed to consider its wider context and potential
importance, which lies in its proposed physiological and physical (i.e. non-gregarious/behavioral)
mechanism to explain how and why trilobites sorted themselves into groups of certain size ranges. By extension, this applies to other species
where there is an energy saving mechanism involved, including birds, which we
have discussed to some extent in Trenchard and Perc (2016) “Energy saving
mechanisms, collective behavior and the variation range hypothesis in
biological systems: a review”.
Again, my thanks to the
commentators for taking the time to consider and to review our paper, which is
much appreciated.